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Where was the first place you traveled to? How was it?

• The first one is New Zealand. I have been there for a year. Also this place is my first place traveling alone. The reason why I picked this New Zealand as my first place is the Lord of the Rings movie but as time goes by, I thought New Zealand has a lot more charming points beside that movie. If I got a chance, I want to be there again.

The first one is New Zealand. I have been there for a year. Also this place is my first place traveling alone. The reason why I picked this New Zealand as my first place is the Lord of the Rings movie but as time goes by, I thought New Zealand has a lot more charming points beside that movie. If I got a chance, I want to be there again.

The first place that I traveled to was New Zealand. I stayed there for a year and it was my first time traveling alone. The reason why I picked New Zealand was because I enjoyed (was a fan of) the Lord of the Rings movies. As I stayed there longer, I discovered more charming points about New Zealand outside of the movie. If I have the chance, I would definitely go again.

• I thought charming point was the atmosphere, it was peaceful and energetic sometimes. They really liked sports like rugby. At first, they don't have any energetic points but as time I've been there I realized I misunderstood New Zealand.

I thought charming point was the atmosphere, it was peaceful and energetic sometimes. They really liked sports like rugby. At first, they don't have any energetic points but as time I've been there I realized I misunderstood New Zealand.

The appealing aspect of the New Zealand was its atmosphere. It was both peaceful and energetic, I really admire that they love sports like rugby. It changed my impression of New Zealand. misunderstand = more with people, less about countries or items impression, different thought/opinion

• I want to visit England because I have an interest of seeing and experiencing art. People around me have their own taste in art say that England is the top of the art. So if I have a chance I want to visit there.

I want to visit England because I have an interest of seeing and experiencing art. People around me have their own taste in art say that England is the top of the art. So if I have a chance I want to visit there.

If I had the chance, I'd love to visit England because I have a strong interest (passion) in seeing and experiencing art. People around me who also enjoy art (have a good taste in art) recommend England as a place with top art.

 

Tell me about the industry/company that you would like to work at.

• I have worked at a startup as a supply chain manager for 7 years and after 7 years working experience as a supply chain manager, I think I have to change my job because I really like to work as a professional but I have to get the skill of a programmer. That leads me to study about that and also trying to change the career to a different thing.

I have worked at a startup as a supply chain manager for 7 years and after 7 years working experience as a supply chain manager, I think I have to change my job because I really like to work as a professional but I have to get the skill of a programmer. That leads me to study about that and also trying to change the career to a different thing.

I have worked as a supply chain manager for the past 7 years at a startup. I've realized that in order to further (advance) in my career, I need to attain (learn) new skills. This is why I plan on changing my job to gain programming skills and broaden my career opportunities.

• The industry I am trying to get in is kind of a consulting, I would like to help people who have a problem with supply chain. Also I'm good at constructing the process from the beginning. My ultimate goal is to make a process by using programming.

The industry I am trying to get in is kind of a consulting, I would like to help people who have a problem with supply chain. Also I'm good at constructing the process from the beginning. My ultimate goal is to make a process by using programming.

I want to enter into the consulting field. I'd like to use my previous experience in supply chain management to apply to my future career and help people who has issues with the supply chain. I also would like to create a process from scratch and I'd be able to do that with programming skills.

 

Minji

• works at a startup, plan to move out from Korea to Europe, trying to change career
• Goals: to describe what I work at to a client in English